Assuming you can get permission from Michael and any others involved, I think you could expand on your relationships a little more. I've read all of them and I think they're so interesting, but there are hints and implications throughout of much larger stories.

Also, I think considering the gains your family has made in acceptance and understanding, I think it would be beneficial to hear how bad it actually was, if only to show the distance they've covered.

You mention your parents a lot, but how did you sibling(s) cope?