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[dolari]

Episode One of Closetspace has a song in it. Alison and I had already worked on a earlier song I wrote called Welcome Home. I hated it. It sucked . Not Alison's fault...I'm just no good at writing songs. Really. So I let Carrie feed me some lyrics. I got them, made them meter as best I could. And here're the results. They'll appear in the first strip of the first episode. Comments? Does it suck? Does it not suck? Should I hire a real songwriter? :)

Anyone wanna write a tune for this? Anyone? I'll post all the music up on the webpage when the time comes to put up the first strip.

I think of sunsets
And I think of you.
Fading memories.
And the sky, so blue.

We were together
For so long a time
We were happy then
When you were mine.

Seperate ways....
Why did I go away?
Seperate ways....
Was it really that bad?

(I was so empty then.)
Seperate ways....
Selfish of me to leave you.
Seperate ways....
Lonely...me without you.

Your voice was soft
A sweet and pleasing sound
You came back to me
It was different now

An olive branch
You had extended me.
If not lovers now
Then let friendship be.

Seperate ways....
Why did I go away?
Seperate ways....
Was it really that bad?

(I was so empty then.)
Seperate ways....
Selfish of me to leave you.
Seperate ways....
Lonely...me without you.

(I was so empty then.)
Seperate ways....
Selfish of me to leave you.
Seperate ways....
Forgetting our good times
Seperate ways....
Leaving my true love
Seperate ways....
Friendship can do for right now
Seperate ways....
Lonely...me without you.