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Aug. 1st, 2012 10:46 amThis week's comic was almost very different. Erin was sick for a few weeks, and we weren't sure she'd be able to draw Zoe for the comic. Just in case, there was another comic I was going to do:
IF ZOE IS NOT AVAILABLE
PANEL 1
Jenn and Han'a walk up the corridor.
Skifander
(o.s.)
The Creatrix!
PANEL 2
Jenn looks over Carrie like a doctor, checking her eyes.
Jenn
I'm not a creatrix. Just a writer.
(beat)
A very late and slow writer.
HAN'A
You are well?
PANEL 3
Jenn looks at Carrie, concerned. More like a mechanic checking under the hood.
Carrie
Yeah. I'll be fine.
(beat)
You...wrote me?
Jenn
More or less.
(beat)
Looking good. I think you'll live.
Panel 4
Jenn, hands on Carrie's shoulders, holds her at arm's length, looking right into her eyes.
Carrie
If you wrote me…you could…
(beat)
You know…
Jenn
It's going to be all right.
(beat)
Everything's going to be all right.
IF ZOE IS NOT AVAILABLE
PANEL 1
Jenn and Han'a walk up the corridor.
Skifander
(o.s.)
The Creatrix!
PANEL 2
Jenn looks over Carrie like a doctor, checking her eyes.
Jenn
I'm not a creatrix. Just a writer.
(beat)
A very late and slow writer.
HAN'A
You are well?
PANEL 3
Jenn looks at Carrie, concerned. More like a mechanic checking under the hood.
Carrie
Yeah. I'll be fine.
(beat)
You...wrote me?
Jenn
More or less.
(beat)
Looking good. I think you'll live.
Panel 4
Jenn, hands on Carrie's shoulders, holds her at arm's length, looking right into her eyes.
Carrie
If you wrote me…you could…
(beat)
You know…
Jenn
It's going to be all right.
(beat)
Everything's going to be all right.