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[dolari]

Closetspace updated - http://www.dolari.net/cs - I'm not looking forward to this storyline, but I'm really proud of Panel 1's photoshopping.

Some tweaks on the pic: The pickup was changed from red to baby blue, text above the door was changed, The whole side of the building was changed to read "Chez Armand." Lighting was changed to make it look like night, and then lights were added to he side walls. Lotta work, came out nice I think.

Comments

[kyleprime.livejournal.com]

I only have one suggestion which might tie in the darkness and why chez Armand shows so well. Put a couple light fixtures right about the lighted area. It looks cool though! Good job!

[drkbish.livejournal.com]

There are light fixtures there already. :-)

[jenndolari.livejournal.com]

JINX! You owe me a Coke. :)

[jenndolari.livejournal.com]

If you look really carefully, there are light fixtures above the "D" and "A" in Hyde Park. In the large version, you can see that I "turned them on" in the Armand pic. :)

[kyleprime.livejournal.com]

Hehe. I got that 'turned on' via the lighting part. I just can't see the actual fixtures cuz I'm old and blind :)

[jenni-the-odd.livejournal.com]

What I was most impressed by, actually, was the crowd scene. Crowds are horrifically tricky to draw (or they are for me, at least), and the final panel's crowd was excellent-- not over-detailed, but displaying wide variety of people in all shapes and sizes, and clearly showing movement without looking frenetic. Well done, ma'am.

[jenndolari.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Actually, it was taken from a friends pic of a rave he was DJing at. I simply "quick drew" what I saw in the pic. Not taking time to get it perfect, just to get A Lot Of People.

Thank you. ^_^