Aug. 17th, 2003

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AWFW and CS updated. Too sleepy to comment. Will comment later.

SLEEP

There are too many "Buts" in Panel 4, I shall fix this.
dolari: (Default)
AWFW and CS updated. Too sleepy to comment. Will comment later.

SLEEP

There are too many "Buts" in Panel 4, I shall fix this.
dolari: (Default)
Soviet revisionism performed on Closetspace. I deleted some Over-explanation from Panel 1, change some clunky word order in Panel 2, got rid of a run-on sentence in Panel 4, and resized a word box in Panel 5.

Maybe I should do this more often. I'm usually lettering these things before bed, and when I wake up, I'm usually not happy with the dialogue I wrote half-asleep.

I'll just put up a placeholder comic on Sunday morning, then an edited version when I wake up.
dolari: (Default)
Soviet revisionism performed on Closetspace. I deleted some Over-explanation from Panel 1, change some clunky word order in Panel 2, got rid of a run-on sentence in Panel 4, and resized a word box in Panel 5.

Maybe I should do this more often. I'm usually lettering these things before bed, and when I wake up, I'm usually not happy with the dialogue I wrote half-asleep.

I'll just put up a placeholder comic on Sunday morning, then an edited version when I wake up.
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