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dolariSoviet revisionism performed on Closetspace. I deleted some Over-explanation from Panel 1, change some clunky word order in Panel 2, got rid of a run-on sentence in Panel 4, and resized a word box in Panel 5.
Maybe I should do this more often. I'm usually lettering these things before bed, and when I wake up, I'm usually not happy with the dialogue I wrote half-asleep.
I'll just put up a placeholder comic on Sunday morning, then an edited version when I wake up.
Maybe I should do this more often. I'm usually lettering these things before bed, and when I wake up, I'm usually not happy with the dialogue I wrote half-asleep.
I'll just put up a placeholder comic on Sunday morning, then an edited version when I wake up.
