May. 29th, 2006

dolari: (Allison)
I'm not happy with Carrie's silliloquoy. It just doesn't feel right. They're the words that needed to go there, but they feel very very selfish. "Look what I did. I'm sorry you missed it, I won't let anyone else miss it."

Although, with what's about to come up, it might be her hubris speaking. I dunno. Just doesn't jibe with what I think should go there. But again, if thre's anything I've learned - it's not to argue with the characters....
dolari: (Allison)
I'm not happy with Carrie's silliloquoy. It just doesn't feel right. They're the words that needed to go there, but they feel very very selfish. "Look what I did. I'm sorry you missed it, I won't let anyone else miss it."

Although, with what's about to come up, it might be her hubris speaking. I dunno. Just doesn't jibe with what I think should go there. But again, if thre's anything I've learned - it's not to argue with the characters....
dolari: (Abaddon)
Thanks to the editing prowess of the lovely asnd talented Dean, I have a version I'm much more happy with. Sometimes I write things more complicated than I should.
dolari: (Abaddon)
Thanks to the editing prowess of the lovely asnd talented Dean, I have a version I'm much more happy with. Sometimes I write things more complicated than I should.
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