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Suddenly had a thought about Genevieve. I'm wondering if it's a story with TOO many foci, versus one singular focus. The main characters keep shifting from the 1980s, to 2060s, to one person who wasn't even a main character at all.

I'm wondering if I should shift the focus to the Genevieve sickness ITSELF. Like Matt Wagner's Grendel, where we focus on a particular set of characters at a particular time with the sickness being more of a shifting background element integral to the characters in the foreground.

Not sure. This story keeps changing what it is.

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"Where will YOU be on the morning of March 3rd?"
"If I'm not at my desk I'll be at the company store. If I'm not at the company store, I'll be on my way to the company store."