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Feb. 26th, 2017 09:24 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
dolariSuddenly had a thought about Genevieve. I'm wondering if it's a story with TOO many foci, versus one singular focus. The main characters keep shifting from the 1980s, to 2060s, to one person who wasn't even a main character at all.
I'm wondering if I should shift the focus to the Genevieve sickness ITSELF. Like Matt Wagner's Grendel, where we focus on a particular set of characters at a particular time with the sickness being more of a shifting background element integral to the characters in the foreground.
Not sure. This story keeps changing what it is.
I'm wondering if I should shift the focus to the Genevieve sickness ITSELF. Like Matt Wagner's Grendel, where we focus on a particular set of characters at a particular time with the sickness being more of a shifting background element integral to the characters in the foreground.
Not sure. This story keeps changing what it is.
