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Mar. 1st, 2014 06:26 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
dolariThe original 1990s Closetspace TV pilot script. Sort of. It was reformatted in 1996 to conform to a 28 page comic back when Dov Sherman and I were going to work on it. http://www.dolari.net/html/99605roo.htm
Episode #2, original TV format. Formatted to 28 page comic: http://www.dolari.net/html/99605roc.htm
A lot of the scenes were rewritten to have more description since the 1994 original was meant for TV, and the rewrite was being done for a comic. I do remember that Becky didn't have a name in the original TV version, just being "Sister." Victoria was Veronica.
Comparing this to the version I sent into the BBC in 2013...yeah, that 94/96 version wasn't all that good. The 2013 version of the Closetspace script, submitted to the BBC during the Trans Comedy Award contest. http://www.dolari.net/pub/ClosetspaceTV.pdf
Episode #2, original TV format. Formatted to 28 page comic: http://www.dolari.net/html/99605roc.htm
A lot of the scenes were rewritten to have more description since the 1994 original was meant for TV, and the rewrite was being done for a comic. I do remember that Becky didn't have a name in the original TV version, just being "Sister." Victoria was Veronica.
Comparing this to the version I sent into the BBC in 2013...yeah, that 94/96 version wasn't all that good. The 2013 version of the Closetspace script, submitted to the BBC during the Trans Comedy Award contest. http://www.dolari.net/pub/ClosetspaceTV.pdf
