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Jun. 29th, 2016 04:51 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
dolariI have a scene in my head for AWFW. Once that I've never been able to get out. There's no place for it in the story, and I've tried to adapt it to Genevieve, since it's the only other story I have where it would remotely work.
I massaged it until I could fit it into Genevieve...and it's ended up as a completely different scene. Which has not pleased those AWFW characters at all.
There's a line in AWFW (http://dolari.net/awfw/193.htm) where Han'a mentions "During the Roman times, I missed her death." That's actually a bit of a lie to make herself feel better. In reality, she followed Nen'a up to that death in the Roman times, but couldn't handle that Nen'a had completely lost her memory of her. She "let her go" after that, and it's hurt her terribly.
There's a scene in Genevieve that STARTED this way, but became it's own thing...and Han'a and Nen'a want to tell that scene somehow.
I massaged it until I could fit it into Genevieve...and it's ended up as a completely different scene. Which has not pleased those AWFW characters at all.
There's a line in AWFW (http://dolari.net/awfw/193.htm) where Han'a mentions "During the Roman times, I missed her death." That's actually a bit of a lie to make herself feel better. In reality, she followed Nen'a up to that death in the Roman times, but couldn't handle that Nen'a had completely lost her memory of her. She "let her go" after that, and it's hurt her terribly.
There's a scene in Genevieve that STARTED this way, but became it's own thing...and Han'a and Nen'a want to tell that scene somehow.
