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Nov. 17th, 2017 11:34 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
dolariSpent the evening walking Lissa and Naomi through what I had of the Genevieve Story.
Takeaways - I really have no third act, nor a climax. Some ideas, but nothing concrete. Some ideas for a more sinister twist to the end than I thought there'd be, as well as expanding some ideas about the less sinister idea I have as well.
All in all, it SOUNDS good for the most part. It's a matter of finessing it into something readable (and also, you know, a whole third act).
Takeaways - I really have no third act, nor a climax. Some ideas, but nothing concrete. Some ideas for a more sinister twist to the end than I thought there'd be, as well as expanding some ideas about the less sinister idea I have as well.
All in all, it SOUNDS good for the most part. It's a matter of finessing it into something readable (and also, you know, a whole third act).
