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[dolari]

Date: Wed, 10 Aug 2005 00:11:12 -0400
From: awfwreader
To: Jenn Dolari <jenn@dolari.org>
Subject: tribe tale
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hope this tribe tale ends soon. It's starting to get boring.

Well...honestly, folks....is it?

Comments

[iqtech.livejournal.com]

No - I think it is a great back story. Don't let one person with no imagination thwart your plot line.

Not Boring!

[sailing-harper.livejournal.com]

No... It's establishing the relationship between Hanna (Han'a) who referred to Abbadon (Emm'a) as "Skai". Hanna clearly had feelings of tenderness towards Abaddon... but Abaddon didn't return them. I'm assuming we'll find out all about that relationship and what hardened it as this tribal tale contiues.

[zaecus.livejournal.com]

No.

The pace is currently slow, but the tribe tale is not boring.

Please, do not cater to the whims of those who have been brainwashed by Hellwood to think that slow equals worthless and that fast and flashy means quality.

[amw.livejournal.com]

I have to admit i kinda lost track of the story after the "real life" parts in the diner finished. It may just be because it's sorta decompressed and only getting 6 panels a week makes it hard to follow. Some day i'll go back a few months and try read the whole lot in a row, it tends to flow better that way.

[nathan-r.livejournal.com]

I'm digging the tribe story.

[jandanadur.livejournal.com]

I like it but it is slow, which can be somewhat frustrating. I wish it were faster but I like it nonetheless...

[mirandakali.livejournal.com]

Ya know,...
I'ld always been a Stephan King fan, but one of things that truely endeared me to him was his intro the the "Nightmares and Dreamscapes" compilation.
In it, he talks about how his critics kept telling him that he should quit while he was ahead, that his work was not the calibur of the stuff he had done in the past. He replied that he really could'nt care less what the critics or anyone else thought about his work. He's a writer. He writes what is in his head screaming, "write me! write me!" He has a story to tell and tells it the way he feels it needs to be told.
Tell the story you want to tell, how you want to tell it. Art is'nt meant to please, it's meant to convey thought and expression. Listen to your heart and put it on the page. Anyone that does'nt like can have a Coke and a smile and shut the fuck up.
....Oh, and I like it. Very David Lynch. :)

[iqtech.livejournal.com]

Well said! Jenn - listen to this person. It is excellent advice.

[debbie-ann.livejournal.com]

I think it is interesting and takes the story into a new direction. Honestly, I would like to see how this part ties in to the previous story...so I hope you finish this, at whatever pace you see fit to write it.

[chrysalis.livejournal.com]

I am enjoying it, though it's coming in a bit slow so I sometimes lose track of things. But like the others said, don't let one person ruin things, :)