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[dolari]

I'm not happy with Carrie's silliloquoy. It just doesn't feel right. They're the words that needed to go there, but they feel very very selfish. "Look what I did. I'm sorry you missed it, I won't let anyone else miss it."

Although, with what's about to come up, it might be her hubris speaking. I dunno. Just doesn't jibe with what I think should go there. But again, if thre's anything I've learned - it's not to argue with the characters....

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[iqtech.livejournal.com]

She sounds awkward - pained - in short, like a woman whose grieving and dealing with the burden of trying to be true to herself in a very disapproving environment.